I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi Lucas, I really like your imaginative ideas. This poem is creative and you have tried very hard with your spelling. Next time, try to remember to use a capital I in your sentences. :) Mum x
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Hi Lucas, I really like your imaginative ideas. This poem is creative and you have tried very hard with your spelling. Next time, try to remember to use a capital I in your sentences. :) Mum x
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