I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Wow I like the sound of that game because of the picture it just makes me want to play it some time. To make other people think that they definitely want play that game straight away you could explain how to play it. You could write something about this game can,t you, How did you find this game ?
Wow! I ike your interest in interland I like it to because I’ve played it. It reminds me of playing interland too:) I liked it because if you press B on interland it will launch a big bomb and won't waste anything isn't that great? Could you do more posts on your blog about interland and who told you about it? Mark told me if you know him
I really like how you put the poster on your blog and i liked it because the blue person was good feelings the sad people.
It was a good idea how you made the poster a bit more clearer and the how you put the heart card with the person. Maybe you sould make a video instead of a poster and you should put the good card.
How did you find the game and how did you get a poster while playing the game?.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say. Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about.
Hi Lucas,
ReplyDeleteGreat Job at adding in a label to help identify what this picture means.
I really like the colours you have used, it is an amazing effort!
Mum x
Wow I like the sound of that game because of the picture it just makes me want to play it some time.
ReplyDeleteTo make other people think that they definitely want play that game straight away you could explain how to play it.
You could write something about this game can,t you,
How did you find this game ?
Wow! I ike your interest in interland I like it to because I’ve played it.
ReplyDeleteIt reminds me of playing interland too:) I liked it because
if you press B on interland it will launch a big bomb and won't waste anything isn't that great?
Could you do more posts on your blog about interland and who told you about it? Mark told me if you know him
ReplyDeleteI really like how you put the poster on your blog and i liked it because the blue person was good feelings the sad people.
It was a good idea how you made the poster a bit more clearer and the how you put the heart card with the person.
Maybe you sould make a video instead of a poster and you should put the good card.
How did you find the game and how did you get a poster while playing the game?.