I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
HI Lucas Its James from South hornby. I like your comic Lucas. Did you think of putting your walt at the end of your slide? You maybe could of arranged the jelly beans legs to back so It looks better.Bye -James
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HI Lucas Its James from South hornby. I like your comic Lucas. Did you think of putting your walt at the end of your slide? You maybe could of arranged the jelly beans legs to back so It looks better.Bye
ReplyDelete-James