I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
This week in writing I we had to make a movie script. My movie is called FRED it is an action and adventure movie. Here are my characters for the movie.
Looks like you've made a very good start to your work Lucas. I like your one word title.. it makes me want to learn more about the character. Will unicorns feature at any stage?:-)
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Looks like you've made a very good start to your work Lucas. I like your one word title.. it makes me want to learn more about the character. Will unicorns feature at any stage?:-)
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